Ok here it is my SasoDei high school fanfic please let me know what you think please no flames I don't like them. (I'm not sure if anyone does.) I would appresiate nice friendly pointers about what you would like to see in this fanfic or how I could improve it. I also have SasoDei vampire fanfic for those who are interested. Well I'll stop blabbing now so you can hopefully enjoy this fanfic.
"Crap un. I'm going to be so late." A tall blonde boy panted while sprinting for his dear sweet life. A black school bag slapped against his aching thigh as if it was desperate to leave a very large bruise, his tight black jeans not really protecting him much from the impact. His black fishnet top allowed everyone to see his toned chest and torso, his long blonde hair glided behind him elegantly giving him a very femine look, his hair was put into a top notch ponytail that was extremely messy but suited his appearance perfectly. It shined a angelic gold and his crystal blue eyes danced like fire in the low winter sun.
Deidara was fifteen and incredibly tall for his age, as he saw the school reach his line of sight he slowed his pace to a power walk tightening his ponytail and adjusting his bang so it fit snuggly over his left eye. He took a deep breath when he reached the school gates, starting a school for the fourth time that year was exhausting you would think he was used to meeting new people and walking through school gates, but in all honesty he hated it.
Gently Deidara pushed open the rusty iron gates making them creak loudly as he walked inside, the sound of people talking, laughing and communicating with their friends ceased immediately, eyes stared at him filled with curiosity and bewilderment, he heard the insulting whispers of the students from the school ask questions amongst their friends what gender he was, he clenced his fist so hi knuckles turned white and walked head down into the school office anger coursing through his body.
A lady with night black hair glanced up at him, "I am assuming that you are the new student starting here at Suna high? Deidara Iwa I think it was?" She asked wearing that false sweet innocent smile that all receptionist do. It made Deidara sick to his stomach sometimes but he reluctantly nodded anyway hoping he could escape from her any time soon. "My name is Shizune-chan, here is your times- table. I Will bring a student down to show you around the school." She stated without looking at him.
Deidara hurridly took his times-table and sat in a chair gestured to him by Shizune. Deidara just stared off into space wondering what his day at school would be like, most likely boring, dull, depressing like schools are. He glanced at the sheet of paper given to him by Shizune observing the lkessons he had that day. 'Maths... Science... English... Chemistry... ART!' he silently cheered in his head.
He loved art more than anything else it was his pride and joy. He lifted his head when he heard the receptionist say his name, "Some one is coming down now, they will be here in a few minutes." She said in a entoxicating sweet tone, that silly, enfuriating smile still plastered to her face, Deidara really did feel like slapping her.
Suddenly the office doors flew open slamming aggressively into the wall. Deidara jumped out of his seat the noise causing him to panic and his heart rate to increase tremendously, he instinctively turned his head to the receptionist table to see it had been abandoned. 'This school is trying to kill me un...' He cried frantically in his thoughts. Deidara slowly averted his gaze to a fierce looking red head, his stealy grey eyes jolted to glare at Deidara, the boys gaze seemed to be studying him. Deidara felt as if he was being constricted and couldn't breath, he dug his fingers into his leg not sure of were to let his gaze drift.
The blood red haired boy slowly walked over to Deidara, making him look even more threatening. "I take it your the newbie. What's your name!" he damanded in a sharp tone that made Deidara joly backwards a little. Deidara gulped and whispered in an obviously shakey tone,"Deidara Iwa..." Deidara just then realized how small the red headed boy was but wiselt thought against saying anything.
"I am Sasori Akasuna, and look who is the lucky boy to have me as a tour guide!" he said smugly sarcasm oozing out of his mouth.














Comments
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when life gives you lemons, drool like there's so tomarrow.
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SasoDei fanfics by me. These are in chapters.
Vampire [link]
Painful Days [link]
It'd be funny if Dei was the typical "disruption" of the class and Sasori was the smart arse. They totally wouldnt get along, but they'd miss eachother eventually ahaha. Good chappie ^.^
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Hyperactive random kiddo' *thumbs up*
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SasoDei fanfics by me. These are in chapters.
Vampire [link]
Painful Days [link]
Not much to say here, other than I'm waiting patiently (Yeah, right) on the next chapter
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It has been said something as small as the flutter of a butterfly's wing can ultimately cause a typhoon halfway around the world.
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when life gives you lemons, drool like there's so tomarrow.
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SasoDei fanfics by me. These are in chapters.
Vampire [link]
Painful Days [link]
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It has been said something as small as the flutter of a butterfly's wing can ultimately cause a typhoon halfway around the world.
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SasoDei fanfics by me. These are in chapters.
Vampire [link]
Painful Days [link]
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